Wednesday, April 10, 2013

PREGUNTAS!?!


One question: Do people understand my thesis? D:

2: Does my topic sentence and ending sentence relate to the following para and relate to the thesis?

3: Doesn't his paper suck? j.k What else do I need to improve on?

FEEDBACK COME TO MEE.




Welp I decided to put my slight insomnia to use and rewrote some stuff.. ~le sigh~

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